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Let's not kid ourselves. Even Holly gets more pipe than Ivy. Ivy is simply a poser. The only scenes we have of her is her doing gay shit (not that there's anything wrong with it :whistle:), an almost blowjob for Jeremy and a sex scene with Mike that happens off screen (still don't understand this decision). She ain't no bad B. A catholic school priest gets more action than her :sneaky:
In other words she is the friend who lies about getting laid to look cool and liberal:LOL::ROFLMAO:

Remind of this
 
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Marley300

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Hello everyone,

I've been offline for a while since I've been dealing with a bad case of pneumonia. The good thing about this situation is that I’ve been stuck at home with not much to do but work; the bad thing is that I’ve had a fever and pleuritis, so I haven’t been able to focus on writing. This week, I’ve focused on editing and finishing the illustrations I’ve received, as well as starting (and even completing) a few for the next update. I also drew a scene I’ve wanted to include for a while, which will appear in the Beta or Full version of this part of the chapter.

I’m feeling better now, and for the past couple of days, I’ve been able to write again, so I’ll keep pushing forward to finish the remaining 5 or 6 scenes as soon as possible.

What scenes or character pairings would you like or expect to see in this chapter? I think I already know which one is the least expected, but it still needed to be included!
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I have a couple surprises and a scene you might not be expecting, and I can't wait to share them with you.
 
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Lord Bradley

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Hello everyone,

I've been offline for a while since I've been dealing with a bad case of pneumonia. The good thing about this situation is that I’ve been stuck at home with not much to do but work; the bad thing is that I’ve had a fever and pleuritis, so I haven’t been able to focus on writing. This week, I’ve focused on editing and finishing the illustrations I’ve received, as well as starting (and even completing) a few for the next update. I also drew a scene I’ve wanted to include for a while, which will appear in the Beta or Full version of this part of the chapter.

I’m feeling better now, and for the past couple of days, I’ve been able to write again, so I’ll keep pushing forward to finish the remaining 5 or 6 scenes as soon as possible.

What scenes or character pairings would you like or expect to see in this chapter? I think I already know which one is the least expected, but it still needed to be included!

I have a couple surprises and a scene you might not be expecting, and I can't wait to share them with you.
Oh no, Robert preview after the shitstorm about him we just had in this thread.... Grab your popcorn fellas!

There could be Lena x Robert x Holly threesome. :unsure:
 

fatpussy123

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Hello everyone,

I've been offline for a while since I've been dealing with a bad case of pneumonia. The good thing about this situation is that I’ve been stuck at home with not much to do but work; the bad thing is that I’ve had a fever and pleuritis, so I haven’t been able to focus on writing. This week, I’ve focused on editing and finishing the illustrations I’ve received, as well as starting (and even completing) a few for the next update. I also drew a scene I’ve wanted to include for a while, which will appear in the Beta or Full version of this part of the chapter.

I’m feeling better now, and for the past couple of days, I’ve been able to write again, so I’ll keep pushing forward to finish the remaining 5 or 6 scenes as soon as possible.

What scenes or character pairings would you like or expect to see in this chapter? I think I already know which one is the least expected, but it still needed to be included!
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I have a couple surprises and a scene you might not be expecting, and I can't wait to share them with you.
Hope Eva recovers soon and doesn't overdo things.

On a more positive note. Lots of talk of unexpected scenes. To me that means new pairings. Maybe Lena x Wade, Lena x Billy? Or maybe the first MMF Lena threesome?
 

Gicoo

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Hope Eva recovers soon and doesn't overdo things.

On a more positive note. Lots of talk of unexpected scenes. To me that means new pairings. Maybe Lena x Wade, Lena x Billy? Or maybe the first MMF Lena threesome?
Wade was being suggested in chapter 12, so neither he nor the promised threesome with him, Lena and Ian should be unexpected.

Billy is a possibility, I'm not sure how you lead Lena to a scene with him without making it rushed. I imagine he would make a move on her at the event for proper timing, not before that.

The most likely unexpected character would be a new one, rather a cameo. Hope this is not the case - flesh out the current cast, don't rely on GGGB for memberberries, Eva.

Second most unlikely would be a tertiary character like John or Eli.

If I had a saying in it, it would be Gillian once Lena visits Mike. Could be rushed as well, but if Gillian turns out to be submissive and sort of fine with Mike fucking other women like Ivy and Lena, he could ask for a threesome. I say sort of, because she was contacting Ian twice, so she may consider leaving Mike and is already looking for other options.
 

fatpussy123

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If I had a saying in it, it would be Gillian once Lena visits Mike. Could be rushed as well, but if Gillian turns out to be submissive and sort of fine with Mike fucking other women like Ivy and Lena, he could ask for a threesome. I say sort of, because she was contacting Ian twice, so she may consider leaving Mike and is already looking for other options.
Mmmh a redhead submissive who's boyfriend is sleeping around, who has a threesome with Lena + said boyfriend, and is also a cheater. Gillian truly is the second coming of Louise.
 

Gicoo

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A scene no one really expects at this point but wish to have is Lena with Ed:whistle:
Also Lena doing something with Perry if you are in that path.
If Ed gets content, Eva got desperate and inconsistent, since he was explicitly droped. If he had content, it would make much more sense to have it start at the beginning of the game. It doesn't make sense for him to make a move on Lena now, since the scenes building it up were removed and not developed.

Perry is a good candidate. If he didn't get together with Emma, he is very likely in a position which can lead to him and Lena discussing this. Lena could cheer him up or may have issues with her current boyfriends as well. Based Lena would take him and Emma. My dream Lena would cuck Emma and steal Perry from her just for the power trip, maybe to put her in her place if Lena has assimilated Seymours philosophy.
 

JoJoPool

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Hello everyone,

I've been offline for a while since I've been dealing with a bad case of pneumonia. The good thing about this situation is that I’ve been stuck at home with not much to do but work; the bad thing is that I’ve had a fever and pleuritis, so I haven’t been able to focus on writing. This week, I’ve focused on editing and finishing the illustrations I’ve received, as well as starting (and even completing) a few for the next update. I also drew a scene I’ve wanted to include for a while, which will appear in the Beta or Full version of this part of the chapter.

I’m feeling better now, and for the past couple of days, I’ve been able to write again, so I’ll keep pushing forward to finish the remaining 5 or 6 scenes as soon as possible.

What scenes or character pairings would you like or expect to see in this chapter? I think I already know which one is the least expected, but it still needed to be included!
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I have a couple surprises and a scene you might not be expecting, and I can't wait to share them with you.
I think it's safe to say this is the update of the most hated characters, let's throw in PerryxIvy in there and enjoy the rage storm because why not at this point.
On a side note what's up with that Lena face, looks AI
 

Nifferman

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Hello everyone,

I've been offline for a while since I've been dealing with a bad case of pneumonia. The good thing about this situation is that I’ve been stuck at home with not much to do but work; the bad thing is that I’ve had a fever and pleuritis, so I haven’t been able to focus on writing. This week, I’ve focused on editing and finishing the illustrations I’ve received, as well as starting (and even completing) a few for the next update. I also drew a scene I’ve wanted to include for a while, which will appear in the Beta or Full version of this part of the chapter.

I’m feeling better now, and for the past couple of days, I’ve been able to write again, so I’ll keep pushing forward to finish the remaining 5 or 6 scenes as soon as possible.

What scenes or character pairings would you like or expect to see in this chapter? I think I already know which one is the least expected, but it still needed to be included!
View attachment 4346646
I have a couple surprises and a scene you might not be expecting, and I can't wait to share them with you.
Hey, at least the delay is not cuz of a funeral this time :HideThePain:
 
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